The first time I went to an MLS soccer match it was the best. I got to see the whitecaps play against Fc Dallas and I was so exited for the start of the game. It was still twenty mins till game time. Then me and my dad went to go get a hotdog and a drink . Then it was game time and they started. the whitecaps started with the ball. the whitecaps scored two goals then the whitecaps kicked the ball forward but it seemed to be going backwards. then Fc Dallas scored three goals to to win the game.
100 Word Challenge Week 13
today is Sunday and every Sunday I have a football game. Last week my team and I played the third best team in the league. But lucky for us we were the best team. the position I played was running back for offence and linebacker for defence. The first play of the game my couch called a play so that I got the ball and a lead blocker. Then I ran the ball and got a touchdown because my lead blocker helped me but they were exhausted so they could not go back on the field.
Hello Hillcrestbaseball33,
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting use of the prompt. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. game, then, ball, and Whitecaps. Also, you would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Keep on writing and learning.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van