The first time I went to an MLS soccer match it was the best. I got to see the whitecaps play against Fc Dallas and I was so exited for the start of the game. It was still twenty mins till game time. Then me and my dad went to go get a hotdog and a drink . Then it was game time and they started. the whitecaps started with the ball. the whitecaps scored two goals then the whitecaps kicked the ball forward but it seemed to be going backwards. then Fc Dallas scored three goals to to win the game.
Hello Hillcrestbaseball33,
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting use of the prompt. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. game, then, ball, and Whitecaps. Also, you would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Keep on writing and learning.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van